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Lovin
06-28-2010, 07:27 PM
Now, I just wanna show you some portraits that I tried in my vacation, in some beautiful locations (Park Guell - Barcelona).
I know that it's not the critique area, but feel free to give me some tips.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4093/4743372729_983fa707c3.jpg

and closer

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4118/4744010304_5dfe5f18d2.jpg

Thank you !

Matt K.
06-28-2010, 08:39 PM
crop .... all i can say ... wonderful subject, but with all the stuff around her she does not stand out as she could. Nicely done, otherwise.:highfive:

JAS_Photo
06-29-2010, 01:56 AM
Very pretty, Mariposa!

Lovin
06-29-2010, 11:37 AM
Thank you JAS :)
Matt, thanks for the tips, I'll crop it.

Marko
06-29-2010, 11:43 AM
Good colour and overall sharpness here
Shot 2 is the stronger of the 2 shots here imo. I like the crop.

Paying attention to the background (and clicking the shutter and the right moment, preferably when distractions are away from the camera) is always hard but very important.

Although the model looks cool with the shades on, for the the shot would likely be stronger without them.
Hope that helps - Marko

Lovin
06-29-2010, 12:29 PM
It was in a touristic attraction park, and it was impossible to have no people in the background.
Thank you Marko.