View Full Version : The Butterfly Whisperer

08-24-2008, 02:22 PM
I'm interested to know what thoughts are on this composition. Any tips on how I can improve it?? Or is it pretty on the mark??


08-24-2008, 06:12 PM
Hi Natanis and Welcome!

This is a pic of a very cute child but it needs a bit of help.

The composition isn't the major problem in this image, but you are missing out on some key basics.

- The eyes are not sharp and the entire face is not sharp
- The eyes are completely black and they should have colour
- If the butterfly were tack sharp maybe we could overlook this, but even the butterfly is soft.
- The image is a bit too red

Hope that helps!