Some helpful criticism would be appreciated =]

[LEM]

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[Marko]

Hi LEM,

FYI - the show forum is mostly to show work without critiques....so since you are asking for critiques I'll move this thread.

I like all 3 shots.

B/W shot - I think this shot would be greatly aided by adding more contrast to the middle and left third of the photo. Interesting vantage point.

fence - I might play with the levels a tad - aside from that, it's a cool shot.

Skywriter - I like this shot too but the sun is competing for attention. Personally, I think I'd crop out about half of the sun and clone the remaining bright spots. I might also add a touch more contrast to the sand in the foreground.

Hope that helps,

Marko