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09-11-2008, 08:37 PM
Hi All :)

Could you stand 2 more from my last "maternity shoot"? :) C&C Please....



09-11-2008, 10:15 PM
I like the composition of #1, the way you've got the young boy looking up, his expression is perfect. The second one I think is cropped a little too tightly. I would like to see it opened up to include little more of the man, as well as both their hands. It would benefit from some fill light to illuminate their faces as well. I'm not fond of the soft haze vignette you've used, but that's a personal thing. Too me it just seems a little 'too much'. Nice work though, and #1 is excellent!

09-12-2008, 10:54 AM
i agree with basically all tiredirons comments - like the 1st shot, the boys expression is perfect! im not a huge fan of the haziness either, just a little touch of it would have more impact than this much i think (personal preferance though). if it were my tummy in these shots, i would be quite pleased with them - how was the moms reaction? you are very close to a frequently used pregnancy shot (maybe overused, but i like it) of the parents hands forming a heart shape while holding the baby belly - have you used or tried that before? these are quite nice - very good for 1st timer!