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bec.schouest89
08-23-2010, 09:08 PM
"The eyes are the gateway to the soul."

Matt K.
08-23-2010, 09:16 PM
nice.

Bambi
08-23-2010, 09:19 PM
lovely pose, the light is perfect and I like her expression. well done!

Hillbillygirl
08-24-2010, 08:13 AM
Very nicely taken. Love the crop, and the expression matches the title, perfectly.

Iguanasan
08-24-2010, 08:22 AM
The expression, pose, and composition are wonderful. Very nice.

Mad Aussie
08-24-2010, 06:33 PM
Beautiful girl and nicely posed and composed too.

It looks like there are artifacts from some processing evident. I'm guessing you've had to work hard to save this shot?

Marko
08-24-2010, 07:58 PM
Welcome bec!

I too very much like the pose and composition here !

(Ohhh MA has good eyes spotting the artifacting...)

JAS_Photo
08-25-2010, 01:01 AM
Pretty capture nonetheless!

Barefoot
08-25-2010, 01:08 AM
Lovely. Is this you?

bec.schouest89
08-25-2010, 11:41 PM
I did! The lighting was actually not that great and my iso was set wrong. Therefor, the picture came out very grainy. I had to do a lot of airbrushing, which are the artifacts you see. I'm super new to this so ANY critiques are welcome!

bec.schouest89
08-25-2010, 11:42 PM
No, this is my bestfriend.

Mad Aussie
08-26-2010, 12:28 AM
Wish MY best friend was that pretty! :) You are lucky to have someone so photographic to practice your portraiture on.

I don't think there's much I can add here other to say the composition is very good. About the only niggle there is I'd rather not see the green grass sneaking into the top of the shot.
Not being sure of what you did in the post processing it's kind of hard to be specific about improvements. If you feel like it, throw up the original so we can see what you started with. We might be able to make stronger suggestions on the camera settings etc from that.

Things I'd have liked to see are the eyes a little brighter and the shadows a little less black. Using something as reflector can help with that.