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K-max
12-09-2010, 04:01 AM
Hello, it is still a lot of error so i hope there will be someone who will criticize it...

http://www.k-artphotography.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/kmax_spirittolive_art_fine_photography.jpg

Endeavor reflects the eagerness and heartiness to face the life

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Iguanasan
12-09-2010, 08:33 AM
Hey, K-max. First off, if you are looking for critique it's a good idea to put your image in the critiques forum which you can find here: Critiques - Fine art photography forum (http://www.photography.ca/Forums/f2/)

That being said, since you asked for some feedback I'll give you a little bit here.

Based on the environment in which the image was taken I think you got the exposure about as good as you could, however, the blown highlights are quite a bit distracting. I'm not sure how you might have prevented that. Maybe some others would have some suggestions. Also, the subject is kind of hidden as the environment is so busy. Maybe catching him in a different location or with a more shallow depth of field would have helped.
K-max
12-09-2010, 09:24 AM
first off, i am sorry to be inapproariate putting the subject, next time when i am looking for critique and some idea, i will put it on the right forum...

by the way, thanks for the input, iguanasan
edG
12-09-2010, 07:21 PM
Here's my two cents - I find the image cluttered on the right and would suggest cropping it along some of the strong vertical lines that exist within the frame - hope you don't mind I have cropped a copy of your image to illustrate
Iguanasan
12-09-2010, 09:45 PM
first off, i am sorry to be inapproariate putting the subject, next time when i am looking for critique and some idea, i will put it on the right forum...

by the way, thanks for the input, iguanasan

No problem... I was just letting you know that you'll likely get stronger opinions if people know it's in the critique forum. People will still help you and give you good answers here but they might feel a bit reserved if it's not in the critique forum.