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AppleShampoo
12-27-2010, 10:29 PM
Hey new here, just wanted some comments, critique, loves hates about my stuff. thanks!!!!! :D
This photo was taken on an old abondoned bus near my house, someone smashed out the windows and its a really cool place!

Richard
12-28-2010, 06:22 AM
Hi AppleShampoo Welcome to the forum.

I like the perspective you have found in this shot, with the smashed glass adding an unusual and interesting framing. The shot looks a little under exposed to my eye. I sure some of out more experienced members will be able to add some more constructive comments.

Marko
12-28-2010, 10:06 AM
Welcome to the forum Appleshampoo!!
I like this shot, I like the juxtaposition of the cracked glass and the branches. I also like the perspective - nice catch!
I do agree that it looks a bit underexposed. hope that helps - Marko

Iguanasan
12-28-2010, 02:20 PM
Hey, yourself. Welcome to the forum! I agree with them as well. The darkness does convey a mood but it's a little too dark. Cool image though.

AppleShampoo
12-28-2010, 04:13 PM
Thanks! I really appreciate the feed back!