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malechi
10-06-2008, 11:16 AM
Shot these about a week ago. Any input would be greatly appreciated.
kiley9806
10-06-2008, 12:01 PM
hello & welcome malechi!
its pretty hard to c&c all 5 shots at the same time, you may want to post only one or 2 per thread for better feedback next time.
these are all very nice - great colors, nice composition. they almost all seem a little tilted to me though, and could use some straightening in post-processing. the 1st shot is very powerful - nice lines!
Marko
10-06-2008, 12:48 PM
Welcome Malechi!

All of these are quite nice but please only post 1-2 images per thread and you'll find the critiques are much more in depth.

Shot 1 is awesome though I might burn in the sky a bit more on the right side.
malechi
10-07-2008, 12:45 AM
Welcome Malechi!

All of these are quite nice but please only post 1-2 images per thread and you'll find the critiques are much more in depth.

Shot 1 is awesome though I might burn in the sky a bit more on the right side.

Thanks Marko, How's this? I used the gradient tool in Lightroom

PS great podcast you have there. I just found it this weekend but I like your tips.
tomorrowstreasures
10-07-2008, 06:44 AM
Thanks Marko, How's this? I used the gradient tool in Lightroom

PS great podcast you have there. I just found it this weekend but I like your tips.

Malechi - looking at the line that divides the reflection from mountain, it is a bit tilted...maybe a slight adjustment?
tomorrowstreasures
10-07-2008, 06:51 AM
Shot these about a week ago. Any input would be greatly appreciated.

The river scene and the bottom scene are especially nice... i like how you composed each- i like how the river leads you into the photo and the movement... the bottom photo is beautiful... you have a wonderful break line at the third mark that adds a lot of interest to what could seem like a common shot.... the saturation of your colors, the balance also. The other two are very nice as well... good job!
Marko
10-07-2008, 09:34 AM
Thanks for the compliment Malechi! and your redo is very well done!
Travis
10-07-2008, 10:01 AM
hello & welcome malechi!
its pretty hard to c&c all 5 shots at the same time, you may want to post only one or 2 per thread for better feedback next time.
these are all very nice - great colors, nice composition. they almost all seem a little tilted to me though, and could use some straightening in post-processing. the 1st shot is very powerful - nice lines!


+1 .............. welcome to the forum!