PDA

View Full Version : Each time dawn appears, the mystery is there in its entirety.



okmqaz42
04-17-2011, 08:14 AM
Each time dawn appears, the mystery is there in its entirety. -Rene Daumal (http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/quotes/r/renedaumal297508.html)

Here is a couple I shot this morning, any opinions would be appreciated.
1.
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5304/5626809532_f23dfce7f6_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626809532/)
Broadmeadow Estuary Dawn (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626809532/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr
2.
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5144/5626223545_ff79ba5161_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626223545/)
Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626223545/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr
Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626223545/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr
3.
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5102/5626809948_027b8fd732_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626809948/)
Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise Swan (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5626809948/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

Bambi
04-17-2011, 09:12 AM
Hi the okmqaz42 (interesting handle by the way :))

I love #1- the dark land and the pastel water and sky really work for me. I like the way the shore curves through the bottom and is matched by the jet trails. I also like how the land from the left converges to the land on the right. I think the exposure, sharpness and colour are right on.
#2. I like the soft feel and the crop on this. but it's not level and that's bugging me. It's tilting down to the right.
#3. very nice. the swan is a nice touch and the colour is rich. you can get the feel of quietness that must have been there that morning. there's a bit of noise but it's not too bad.

okmqaz42
04-17-2011, 09:44 AM
Hi Bambi, thanks for the feedback, I have straightened number 2 now, once you pointed it out it was all I could see! Funny story behind the noise on number 3- Camera was set to ISO 2000! i had been taking pictures in a very dark Pub on Friday night and forgot to change it back to something more sensible. The lesson here is always *always* check your settings...

Mad Aussie
04-18-2011, 01:23 AM
Bambi's picked anything I would mentioned ... which is very little on very good photos like these.

Bambi
04-18-2011, 11:44 AM
Bambi's picked anything I would mentioned ... which is very little on very good photos like these.

I feel like you should refer to me as 'grasshopper' ;):evil2:

asnow
04-18-2011, 12:30 PM
Got nothing to add. Bambi has summed it up well.

okmqaz42
04-18-2011, 04:15 PM
Thanks everyone.