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taffy
05-26-2011, 05:26 PM
Taken at Clevedon, Somerset.

Tried to create a "simple" landscape

Comments welcome

Taffy:)
Greg_R
05-26-2011, 06:18 PM
Fantastic shot.
Mad Aussie
05-27-2011, 01:55 AM
Good job. I think you've got this one nailed!
edG
05-27-2011, 06:29 AM
love the tones and the comp
taffy
05-27-2011, 07:51 AM
:)Thanks for looking and your kind comments.

Taffy:)
AcadieLibre
05-27-2011, 09:57 AM
I really want to like this photo but it seems a bit stark as the bottom to me appears blown out somewhat and the sky I would like better if there were more definition to the sky. I do like the composition of the photo though.
Marko
05-27-2011, 11:27 AM
I think this is quite nice but for me i find there is too much space at the bottom.
asnow
05-27-2011, 06:26 PM
One other small thing that bothers me a bit is the gap between the pier and the berm (not sure the correct term) at the top right. My mind keeps wanting to see the two joined.
Lorey
05-28-2011, 09:28 AM
One other small thing that bothers me a bit is the gap between the pier and the berm (not sure the correct term) at the top right. My mind keeps wanting to see the two joined.

Ditto.