View Full Version : The Sands at Uphill
taffy
06-10-2011, 06:25 PM
Another from my visit to the beach at Uphill in Somerset.
Comments welcome.
Taffy:)
Matt K.
06-10-2011, 07:08 PM
Very nice image. Love the composition of this one, especially how the poles lead your eye to the sun rays; looks like a long exposure image with the use of a filter. Very well done!
Mad Aussie
06-11-2011, 05:21 PM
We are quite literally forced to follow the strong leading line here which is good.
I do find the heavy darkness of the poles a little out of place with the tonal range of the rest of the photo. I wonder if more contrast or darkening the midtones would help. Perhaps this can be best achieved in the b&W conversion process. Still a nice photo though.
taffy
06-14-2011, 08:28 AM
Thanks Matt and MA for commenting.
Taffy:)
Marko
06-14-2011, 08:36 AM
Very strong graphic image - well done!
OliverD
06-14-2011, 10:52 PM
I would like to see this with a slight tinge of colour...
thoughton
06-15-2011, 05:11 AM
Nice shot Taffy, the classic photo of receding groynes (ugh, sounds like some kind of disease). I think MA may have a point about the dark posts. I would also clone out that dark smudge in the top left corner. In fact a crop would accomplish the same thing, and might tighten up the composition. Perhaps 10% off the left and bottom?
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