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okmqaz42
07-13-2011, 04:35 PM
Second proper outing with my film camera using NEOPAN 400CN 35mm - Black & White film. A mixture of cityscape and street photography.

I always welcome feed back and comments and I hope is to improve!

1.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6010/5934878716_0747dc2db7_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934878716/)
"I'm Just Me" (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934878716/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

2.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6027/5934316541_0cff6c0f51_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934316541/)
He looks Happy.... Pills (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934316541/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

3.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6142/5934880224_ecac5de1c6_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934880224/)
Would you but this for a Ha' Penny (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934880224/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

4.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6012/5934317101_403c67e4a1_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934317101/)
Bike to Work Scheme ..what work? (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5934317101/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

Mad Aussie
07-13-2011, 06:33 PM
Cool shots/compositions ... sharp, strong tones, black blacks and white whites ... they look like winners to me!

Iguanasan
07-13-2011, 09:21 PM
A very nice set indeed. The bikes and that portrait are my favourites.

JAS_Photo
07-14-2011, 02:05 AM
The bikes and portrait shots are my fave as well, but the happy guy made me smile.

*One of my favourite quotes, from Samuel Becket, the full quote being, “Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try Again. Fail again. Fail better.”

taffy
07-14-2011, 10:54 AM
All very good......well done

Taffy:)

thoughton
07-15-2011, 09:21 AM
Nice set, there is just something alluring about the contrast you get from film. 1 and 2 for me. Great hat, and great name for the pharmacy.

okmqaz42
07-15-2011, 01:29 PM
Thanks for the comments, I am really enjoying learning with the film and the feedback I have received on the form has been essential, Tim, the "pharmacy" is a sweet shop, which specializes in American candy. Nice selection but i am more of a Cadburys man myself.

Here is a couple more from the same day out.

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6144/5936505852_afa72265e2_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5936505852/)
Paris, Dublin (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5936505852/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6139/5936505566_9d1f6e58cd_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5936505566/)
checkmate (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5936505566/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6131/5939399828_48b76b1222_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5939399828/)
The true Dubliner (http://www.flickr.com/photos/okmqaz42/5939399828/) by okmqaz42 (http://www.flickr.com/people/okmqaz42/), on Flickr

thoughton
07-15-2011, 01:44 PM
Boo, I liked it better when I thought it was a pharmacy :D Would have been a genius name, although I expect the codgers on the medical council would have had collective apoplexy.

Marko
07-15-2011, 02:14 PM
Quite a nice set, dig the BW here.
My faves are happy pills and 1st shot post 7.
In that shot I can see vignetting and you chopped some of it out. In this rarer of cases, the vignetting adds quite a bit to the shot imo. I'd actually go back to the file if it were mine and include as much of the vignetting as possible to see if I like it. (pretty sure I would). Just for comparison I took a shot this winter of the Montreal Biosphere (http://www.photography.ca/Forums/f22/winter-montreal-biosphere-13928.html) w/deliberate vignetting in case you wanted to take a look.
Best! Marko

okmqaz42
07-15-2011, 02:26 PM
Thanks Marko, i like your Biosphere shot, I take you point about the vignetting. A big cause of the vignetting in that shot is that I have my sigma 10-20mm DX lens mounted on a 35mm film camera. If i am wider that 15mm you can pretty much see the inside of the lens in the photos, I think in some cases it works, but definitely not all the time. Thanks again for the feedback.
B

PS see below for the extreme end of my use of the DX lens on the film body!

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kat
07-15-2011, 03:18 PM
I quite enjoy these. Nice BW and lots of character to them. :)

Hillbillygirl
07-17-2011, 06:35 AM
Excellent set. Love these in b/w, especially the "Happy Pills", and the "Diner" shot for me.