The Ledge

[Dwayne Oakes]

Thanks for taking a look !

-Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm
-0.5 seconds @ f/16
-46mm
-ISO 100
-EV -1/3
-jpeg no pp

Take care,

Dwayne Oakes

http://dwayneoakes.zenfolio.com/img/v6/p844356476-4.jpg

[tirediron]

I'm seeing too much rock and not enough 'leaf on the ledge'. While I like your monochromes, I think this one might be better executed in colour; the commonality of tone doesn't give this one the 'pop' it shoud have.

[Marko]

Agree again with T.I. the tones are too similar. It needs major dodging and burning to make it sing. There is no black for example.

I think this shot would have been better as an 'abstract' without the foliage. It looks like it could be a relief map.
Hope that helps
Marko

[tirediron]

Agree again with T.I. the tones are too similar. It needs major dodging and burning to make it sing. There is no black for example.

I think this shot would have been better as an 'abstract' without the foliage. It looks like it could be a relief map.
Hope that helps
Marko

Oooooh good call! Well spotted sir! :highfive:

[Dwayne Oakes]

Thanks for your comments on this one !

Take care,

Dwayne Oakes