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kevindaly
01-13-2012, 07:46 PM
Hi everyone. This is my first post to the the photography.ca

I'm a photographer based out of Ottawa Ontario. I've been shooting for just over 5 years and 3 years shooting weddings.

Feel free to comment and critique on any photos I post

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-3P6KB72/1/M/i-3P6KB72-M.jpg

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-5sVcpbx/1/M/i-5sVcpbx-M.jpg

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-HmW2Zd9/1/M/i-HmW2Zd9-M.jpg

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-gMbQS6T/1/M/i-gMbQS6T-M.jpg

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-zj9rNjm/1/M/i-zj9rNjm-M.jpg

http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/photos/i-jK4Rvt7/1/M/i-jK4Rvt7-M.jpg

Iguanasan
01-13-2012, 08:43 PM
A very nice set of images, Kevin. Not a big fan of the head popping into the last one but the rest are pretty good. Since you have them in the critiques section I'll give you my :twocents: for what it's worth.

1) Just love the pose you set up here. A shallower depth of field would have smoothed out the background and made it a bit less distracting though. Also, having their feet cut off is a bit troublesome.

2) A lovely moment... I wouldn't change a thing

3) Very nice. I'd like a little more room below her feet but otherwise a very nice shot.

4) A very nice portrait. You could burn in the bottom left and that bright spot just over his shoulder a bit to keep the attention on his face.

5) Too bad about the flash bounce back in the window. Otherwise a very nice shot.

6) That fellow's head almost looks like it's a cardboard cutout and it's horribly out of place. I'd consider a pano type crop right across the podium and just above the ladies' heads.

Overall, you've elicited and captured some wonderful expressions and when you are working with crowds and such it can be very difficult so your results are quite nice.

susan
01-14-2012, 11:34 AM
I already welcomed you in a different thread, but want to welcome you "proper" here.
Welcome!

Mad Aussie
01-14-2012, 04:13 PM
I love the light in shot 3 :)