View Full Version : Through the gates of the Castle of Fasil.
04-24-2012, 03:01 AM
I took this one from my visit to an old castle in the North of the country. I was trying to compose for the gates and this boy jumped in. What do you think?
I also have some more pictures coming up.
Hi Yisehaq, I like where you going with this - but I would like a little more symmetry (balanced amounts of the gate in the foreground showing on each side) and the image seems slightly tilted to the right.
04-24-2012, 07:50 AM
Thanks edG! I gave it another try.
What do you think?
04-24-2012, 07:53 AM
I like the color a lot better because the boy is kind of lost in the sepia one, plus, you may want to try and clone out the hose/pipe on right side of arch.
04-24-2012, 07:56 AM
Thanks theantiquetiger! I thought so too.
04-24-2012, 08:00 AM
I agree w/Ed on the slope and see you've corrected it nicely.
I like both corrections - they are very different and I like the colour one for the cuteness and the monochrome one for the vintage look.
04-24-2012, 08:23 AM
Thanks Marko! I sometimes get too excited I think! ;(
04-24-2012, 01:20 PM
I think my preference is monochrome one. I also find that the boy standing there looking out helps make the image.
04-24-2012, 05:09 PM
I am with monochrome it is much stronger. Also like first processing-better vintage look.
04-25-2012, 12:57 AM
I really love the monochrome re-edit. I like the 2 layers of arches and 2 layers of doors. The symmetry being broken by the boy in door realy works for me.
04-25-2012, 02:01 AM
Thanks you all!
04-25-2012, 02:24 AM
One thing's for sure, your photographs are always some of the most interesting and I always look forward to seeing them posted.
04-25-2012, 02:38 AM
Thanks so much, Barefoot! That is a great compliment!
I prefer the colour one. But for me this image is really all about the composition which is great and definitely better in the revised versions. Well done.
04-25-2012, 04:20 AM
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