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Matt K.
12-30-2012, 11:25 PM
Not sure if this is the right forum for this; have not been out shooting much, so I spent some time learning more about Photoshop. This is a composite of 6 separate images ... tried to do something a bit surrealistic, not sure if it works ....

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8223/8328649268_4358783087_b.jpg

Realist
12-31-2012, 03:08 AM
I think it has more potential if you simplify it a bit. There's a little bit too much going on. I would take out the train, the metal part on top and the driftwood. The snake isn't too bad there. I think simplicity is often best for aesthetics.

Marko
12-31-2012, 09:56 AM
I quite like the play here - fun image.

JednaChwila
09-09-2013, 10:30 AM
very unique, strange... and I like it :)

QuietOne
09-11-2013, 12:11 AM
I agree with Realist that there's too much going on. I think some of the elements are a little too far apart, too. Would getting the snake and the metal thingy on top closer to the person in the pool help?

Matt K.
09-15-2013, 11:36 AM
I agree with Realist that there's too much going on. I think some of the elements are a little too far apart, too. Would getting the snake and the metal thingy on top closer to the person in the pool help?


I think it has more potential if you simplify it a bit. There's a little bit too much going on. I would take out the train, the metal part on top and the driftwood. The snake isn't too bad there. I think simplicity is often best for aesthetics.

The whole point was to make it a bit surrealistic. if I were to simplify it, it would loose that, imho.