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theantiquetiger
05-08-2013, 02:11 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7416/8720214423_d12b292fe3_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8720214423/)
barn (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8720214423/) by Theantiquetiger (http://www.flickr.com/people/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7311/8721422236_4b37b9775c_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8721422236/)
barn2 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8721422236/) by Theantiquetiger (http://www.flickr.com/people/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr


Untouched original

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7348/8721430330_545a14eb56_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8721430330/)
barn3 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/8721430330/) by Theantiquetiger (http://www.flickr.com/people/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

Marko
05-08-2013, 05:59 PM
I like shot 1 by far. I might clone out the 1 cm of the tree that is raised on the mid right edge, but now we are gettin' niggly.

Realist
05-08-2013, 08:42 PM
I will agree, I like number one better. I think the crop is better than number 2.

thoughton
05-09-2013, 04:29 AM
Number 1 for me too. The vignette helps the sky, which personally I think is too flat (and pink) in number 2,

Runmonty
05-09-2013, 05:59 AM
I too prefer the first one.

I think if you reset the whites using levels or curves it would improve the 2nd shot. This is something that to me (and I emphasise TO ME) is a bit like fingernails on a blackboard. When adding toning I like to see the whites readjusted to white . Just my personal preference though.

Having said that, Mad Aussie picked up on one of my shots recently where I hadnt done what I just suggested.