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kiley9806
02-10-2009, 05:40 PM
would like to hear some feedback on this shot... thanks :)
jjeling
02-10-2009, 05:45 PM
Awesome shot. I really like the lighting in this. There is one critique I would have. In the upper left corner of the shot, you can see the corner of the room. I would definitly crop that out. Maybe even crop the upper third of the image. Maybe rework the eye a bit(This is something I will always do after a recent podcast from marko ;-) After that, this image should be an award winner. Nice work. Would love to see more from this shoot.
I don't mind the shot.
I would crop the photo a bit. I find that there is too much "nothing" space. But that is just preference. I do have a little problem with her left eye..guess the right eye on my screen. I wish I could see a bit more of it. Maybe her head tilled a bit more towards the light.
I'd like to see more shots too!
scorpio_e
02-10-2009, 06:29 PM
I do like the concept.
I think there is too much nothing space. I would do a much tighter drop. It also look a little oof. The lighting is a little to contrasty. Would love to see more of the project:)
kiley9806
02-10-2009, 11:54 PM
great thoughts all - thanks for the feedback. too funny that i totally didnt see that corner of ceiling... im usually pretty crazy when it comes to cropping out little things like that - thanks for the 2nd set of eyes... :) the lighting is all natural from a window... ive reworked the cropping & played with the eye a bit more here...
jjeling
02-11-2009, 12:21 AM
much better, but i still think i would crop some more off the top.
scorpio_e
02-11-2009, 11:41 AM
The crop is better. I would still remove from the top and I would also try cropping a little left too.
kiley9806
02-11-2009, 11:57 AM
thanks guys - im going to leave the crop as is though, because when i was playing with it, if i took any more off, i would lose that halo/shadowed part that i like... but thanks for the feedback!
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