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mrthahma
09-26-2013, 03:34 PM
hello all member, i am amatuer photographer. please help me comment my photos. i hope so leaning more. All my photo i use Canon T3 and len Canon Zoom Lens EF 38-76 mm F/1:4-5.6 .Thank you.17998http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3782/9935269194_783ae0e211_b.jpg

Marko
09-26-2013, 04:51 PM
Welcome to the forum!
Strong start for sure! I dig both of these for sharpness, comp and colour.

mrthahma
09-26-2013, 07:33 PM
thank you for coming my topic.

aubintbay
09-26-2013, 07:59 PM
Both are very nice but I really like that first one! Wish it were one of mine.
And welcome to the forum!!

missyinmuskoka
09-26-2013, 08:03 PM
I love the first one because my eye is drawn to the bee right away. The contrast and exposure is perfect. The second one is a little too distracting with all the bright spots in the background. You can try and tone those spots down and I think it would improve it. Great job holding focus on the bee!

mrthahma
09-26-2013, 08:39 PM
Thanks for the comments!!!

Hillbillygirl
09-28-2013, 07:44 AM
Firstly, welcome to the forum Mrthahma
Love that first shot. Perfect dof to really make that bee pop against that lovely soft background, and lovely composition.
Really likin the sharp detail of that in-flight of the wasp also, though.

mrthahma
09-29-2013, 12:07 AM
thank you for comments

JednaChwila
09-30-2013, 08:09 AM
beautiful makro! great colours!

mrthahma
10-02-2013, 04:08 AM
thank you for comment.

Jason
10-02-2013, 11:58 AM
I also really like that first one. Nicely done!

mrthahma
10-09-2013, 01:21 PM
Thanh you for comment.