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Lorey
07-01-2014, 10:09 PM
For the most part I hate naming photos so the file name works for me.

http://www.lmbphotos.com/web_postings/P5150035.jpg

Iguanasan
09-19-2014, 09:17 PM
I think he would make a nice subject but, and I hope you don't mind me saying, I'm wishing you had gotten closer.

Marko
09-20-2014, 04:47 AM
I agree with Iggy because the light itself is competing for main focal point of the image. If it were mine, I might try to burn in all that light by a good 30-40%.
I might also try a 1.5 inch crop off the left and bottom as well as the burn.
Hope that may help and nice playing with the comp.

Lorey
09-20-2014, 05:06 PM
Forgot about this one.

Thanks Iggy and Marko. I never mind constructive criticism, Iggy. Your suggestions would probably work quite well, Marko. But my intentions are not about the subject of a street musician. It's about a lone street musician AND his surroundings in the earliest stage of evening light that casts long shadows. Ya got to take in the BIG picture :)

Appreciate your time to look and comment.

Marko
09-20-2014, 06:26 PM
My pleasure Lorey and you can be sure I took exactly that into consideration before commenting. I spent several minutes looking at this photo before commenting. I do like the unusual comp though.

Hillbillygirl
09-25-2014, 08:06 AM
I do really like this lonely street performer image, but DO agree wholeheartedly with Iggy, and Marko. That bright light just keeps stealing my eye from the main scene and all I look at is that crack in the pavement.

Lorey
09-25-2014, 08:20 AM
Thank you for looking and comments HBG. I appreciate it.