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ewaizel
02-08-2015, 01:39 AM
https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7437/16469046682_08c1a34743_o.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/r6jaNJ)Along the fence_ (https://flic.kr/p/r6jaNJ) by Enrique Waizel (https://www.flickr.com/people/77821403@N02/), on Flickr

theantiquetiger
02-08-2015, 06:29 PM
Nice shoot, but if you don't mind, a little critique...

I like the shot but I feel it would have been stronger if you got down a little lower, maybe where the top rung on the left, was above you eye level. There doesn't seem to be a high focal point. The second post appears to be the sharpest area, but all the wood is a little under exposed. You lost detail in the snow. I have never shot snow before, but somewhere in this forum, there is a tutorial on shooting snow.

It may just be the OCD in me, but that one twig by itself in the snow near the bottom right, bothers me.

ewaizel
02-08-2015, 11:09 PM
Thanks for the comment.
I did not have an angle for a lower shot. That would had introduced some extra subjects into the shot. I wanted to totally isolate only the fence and snow.
About the exposure, I actually overexposed 2/3 or a step to make snow turn white instead of grey. I introduced a bit of extra contrast during post processing. That probably turned the wood a bit darker. Nevertheless, the histogram does not show any clipping on the left.

asnow
02-09-2015, 08:45 PM
I kind of like the higher angle for this shot. It gives a better impression of the snake like shape of this fence. A lower angle like AT suggests and you you make lose that impact.

Hillbillygirl
02-15-2015, 09:56 AM
Agreed with ASnow. This angle def works here, and with a lower angle the fence would def not have the same impact as it would disappear within itself in some places. Very well executed.