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JAS_Photo
02-16-2015, 02:05 AM
https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8615/16519908776_d363ec1b6d_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/raNRko)

Two Old Girls and Their Beau (https://flic.kr/p/raNRko) by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography (https://www.flickr.com/people/31784210@N07/), on Flickr

asnow
02-16-2015, 12:25 PM
I really like the comp and the juxtaposition of the new and old. I do find it just a tad flat or perhaps a bit underexposed.

JAS_Photo
02-16-2015, 03:17 PM
The back lighting was tricky with the building on the right being too bright and the other two being back lit only. Here is a re-edit:

https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7436/16552512215_a172e636c3_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/rdFXcD)

The Two Grande Dames re-edit (https://flic.kr/p/rdFXcD) by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography (https://www.flickr.com/people/31784210@N07/), on Flickr

asnow
02-16-2015, 04:07 PM
I like the re-edit. Much better in my opinion.

JAS_Photo
02-16-2015, 05:11 PM
Thanks, asnow, the first edit was definitely not my best work. :shrug: