Mars-like Surface (II)

[Gem]

So at MA's goading, I'm putting them up here! Critique away! :goodvibes

[Mad Aussie]

So at MA's goading, I'm putting them up here! Critique away! :goodvibes
Well ... the first one's crap http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/getdown.gif

But the 2nd one's very appealing for it great use of light and shadow. Furthermore, you've captured the texture of the sand very nicely as well which helps to make this photo stand well above the other.
I like the way the ridges 'walk' our eyes along the scene.

The 1st photo (the crap one http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/hihi.gif) is too out of focus for my liking and general composition seems lacking any specific meaning also.

So ... Nice job not making both crap there Gem http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/2thumbsup.gif

[Mad Aussie]

How's that? http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/bootyshake.gif

[tomorrowstreasures]

the first one looks like MA was stomping around LOL

[Gem]

MA: Hurtful http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-sad052.gif (http://www.freesmileys.org)

Lol. No, it's not. Thanks for the feedback. By out of focus, did you mean there's no focus in general or that it's actually out of focus (not sharp)?

Oh, I thought I should point out that it's snow, not sand. Kinda hard to tell cause of the B&W, I guess.

TT: LOL :highfive:

[Mad Aussie]

I wondered if it was snow due to the sparkly bits in the first shot.

Yes, I meant that it's not sharp enough for my liking.

However, if it was meant to look like it was taken by a small spaceship , thousands of miles away then well done ... it does http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/hihi.gif

And I do really think that 2nd shot is a winner.

[Gem]

I wondered if it was snow due to the sparkly bits in the first shot.

Yes, I meant that it's not sharp enough for my liking.

However, if it was meant to look like it was taken by a small spaceship , thousands of miles away then well done ... it does http://www.mtbdirt.com.au/home/smf/Smileys/classic/hihi.gif

And I do really think that 2nd shot is a winner.

I get what you're saying now. It mostly caught my eye cause of the pattern. Oh well, not every one can be a winner :o

[Marko]

I like both shots, but it's true the second one wins. The first shot could be sharper it's true, but I see the cool patterns Gem is talking about and I find them quite captivating despite a bit of softness.

The second shot though is more beautiful and has great texture and light and shadow play as M.A mentioned. It's also one of those shots that could be printed 1,000 different ways with ever so slightly varying versions. I might crop a touch on the right side, about 1/2 inch. It would also look great as a big print.
Hope that helps
Marko

[Gem]

Thanks for the feedback, Marko. I try to crop everything in a 5x8 manner; at first I tried to crop out the right side but then the bottom would also have to be cropped, which is why I cropped it this way.