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jasonaphotography
07-16-2015, 07:34 PM
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This is my first time posting here, so hopefully it works :P.

Although my BlackBerry z30 can't hold of candle to a DSLR, I always carry my phone with me, and as such, take quite a few pictures with it. Here's one.
It's not a double exposure or anything fancy, it's just a plain old reflection.
I'm not as used to this style of photography, so constructive criticism would be great :)!

Edit: I should probably note that this is by no means one of my prize shots, just me trying something different :P!

Iguanasan
07-16-2015, 09:25 PM
You managed to post just fine. I'm not sure if the black areas above and below are supposed to be part of the image or if you took a screenshot of the photo. I have a Z10 and this looks like a vertical gallery preview of the image. I'd rather see the full image.

I like the idea of the reflection but I'm not sure if there is a clear subject so I find the image a bit confusing.

jasonaphotography
07-17-2015, 12:16 PM
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This should be the proper one. If not, sorry :P.
Thanks for the tips :)!

Marko
07-17-2015, 01:21 PM
I have to agree with iggy here. There is no clear subject for me either.... so I'm afraid the image doesn't work for me.

Iguanasan
07-18-2015, 05:05 PM
Maybe you should give us an idea of what you were trying to accomplish and we could provide some more help. All I see in the photo at this point is a very cool silhouette (on the left side), some fuzzy trees (due to two panes of glass providing a reflection, and a reflection of a Rosetta Stone book/software.