keyboard 30 second exposure.

[Sendeva]

30seconds 100 iso keyboard shot thought it looks cool so im sharing.
Enjoy.20474

[Marko]

I like the concept overall. I could offer a critique but you have no critiques listed in your profile - let me know if you'd like me to comment further. Thx Marko

[Sendeva]

Hey marko.
Feel free and comment further.

Just to note this photo was taken when i was trying to fix my nx1000 it was giveing me alot of bright red, blue, green dots in the same pattern on all my shots.
But i got it fixed after i reflashed my camera firmware.
So happy got my camera working without sending it away.

[Marko]

Cool glad your fix was easy!

My comment was that you have all these smaller red lights on the keyboard leading to the large rectangular orange light up top - this is good. The eye digs a pattern to follow.

But, that big rectangular orange light, for me, is the focal point of the image...but it's just an orange light....blank - so for me it's not so interesting.
Imagine if in that orange rectangle there was a message or some symbols - that would have made the image much much stronger imo....because our eye would have been led to something we can grab onto.
Hope that may help.

[Sendeva]

Thanks for the feedback.
Now i want to go back and redo this shot with multiple exposure and blend them together.
Think i have a project tonight.

[Hillbillygirl]

Def a cool concept Sendeva, and waiting for the second attempt here.