View Full Version : A couple from New Orleans

10-16-2018, 06:54 PM
https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1922/31497234848_416fbeded3_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/PZiyzf)quiet zone (https://flic.kr/p/PZiyzf) by Chris Campbell (https://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1937/31497234528_9a98507af9_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/PZiytJ)tinman (https://flic.kr/p/PZiytJ) by Chris Campbell (https://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

10-19-2018, 08:27 AM
For harsher critiques -
shot 1 - I see the juxtaposition of the sign and the player, but it's too busy IMO.
If it were mine I might crop all the people out on the left all the way to the violinist's back.

shot 2 - also looks too busy for me without a strong enough focal point.

Hope it wasn't too harsh

10-19-2018, 11:27 AM
Not harsh at all, I wasn’t big on these images to begin with. I had a bad day of shooting. I guess out of practice.