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casil403
03-16-2009, 04:00 PM
and more practice trying out settings and light...
Give it to me straight Docs.... :)

EJC
03-16-2009, 04:53 PM
Hey pretty good Casil! I think if #1 had the contast of # 3 it would be perfect. Composition of 2 & 3 aren't as interesting to me dispite the cool water drops.

cheers
EJC

casil403
03-16-2009, 05:09 PM
Hey pretty good Casil! I think if #1 had the contast of # 3 it would be perfect.

Thanks and is this any better after I de-pp'd it?

EJC
03-16-2009, 07:46 PM
Hi Casil

I changed computers and your first example looks quite a bit better than it did on my laptop. I hope you don't mind but I experimented with your photo. Fist I turned the back ground black then dodged the petal edge highlights and water drops and burned the pedals midtones in areas where there wasn't much definition. Finally I used Unsharp Mask @ 40% It's more personal preference than being right or wrong. I hope this helps.

cheers
EJC

Gem
03-16-2009, 08:50 PM
Okay. Personally, I *love* #3. The light on the water drops totally won me over! :p I also like the comp on #1 and the soft feel (at least to me) on #2. Nice job!

casil403
03-16-2009, 09:31 PM
Thanks guys...and I don't mind if you PP it when I post it on here...I can't wait to get photoshop!
Appreciate the comments! :)

Mad Aussie
03-16-2009, 09:54 PM
Casil ... knowing that in terms of photography you are as 'fresh' as those beautiful flowers you've shot there, I think you've done a magnificent job. Great exposure. C&C here really is just fine tuning at best.

Nice stuff!

MoinMoin
03-17-2009, 02:12 PM
Hi casil403,

I like these white flower shots too - especially with the water drops. I am really looking forward your next photos when you have the program Photoshop too :)