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asnow
07-14-2019, 05:42 PM
Love the colourful guitar this person was playing in the park.

theantiquetiger
07-14-2019, 05:46 PM
Cool shot, a little critique, the white balance is a bit on the blue side (maybe me)

asnow
07-14-2019, 06:29 PM
Thanks AT.
It might be a bit on the blue side. It was at dusk and my white balance was set to daytime. I will correct it.

asnow
07-14-2019, 06:37 PM
White balance corrected.

Marko
07-15-2019, 09:51 AM
Nice capture asnow - The light is tough in this shot. This colour compared to shot 1 looks better - though to my eye, slightly green.

Aside from the cast - the guitar face itself doesn't sing loudly enough (it's the star of the shot - it looks flat)
To my eye it looks like it could benefit from a small burn in the midtones and shadows- maybe 15%....and a teeny dodge in the highlights but not the chrome or anything that's specular.
Face could benefit from a small dodge.
Hope that may help.

asnow
07-16-2019, 06:31 PM
Thanks Marko for the suggestions. I will try them out.