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Lovin
03-21-2009, 10:39 PM
Critiques, please :)

Thank you,
Lovin

jjeling
03-21-2009, 10:59 PM
Im sure you are going to get many people who dislike this. Personally I like this kind of stuff. When composed correctly, the most simple pictures make the most extraordinary images. I like the concept here. Definitely my style. The straight pole against a nice blue sky. Instead of a pure blue sky, the clouds offer something else but in a very subtle way. The pole is a little too bright for my liking, and I think you probably should have used a circular polarizer(a must for this stuff). The concept here is great as well. I think a CP would have helped our greatly. The clouds would have popped a lot more and the sky would have been a deep blue. It would have probably brought out some more detail in the post as well. I like seeing this kind of stuff as you can probably tell. Keep them coming.

Lovin
03-22-2009, 12:54 AM
Let's see if this one is better.

Lovin
03-22-2009, 12:20 PM
Which one is better first or second attempt?

jjeling
03-22-2009, 12:22 PM
I think the first one is but not by much. Its pretty much the same image, the could formation is just a little different. It might work as a B&W image though.