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Matthew
05-10-2009, 11:47 AM
Hello all. My first post to the critiques forum. Any comments are most appreciated. Thank you. (I hope I did the upload correctly!)

Bambi
05-10-2009, 11:52 AM
no claim of expertise here so take it at face value:
I like the composition but I find the focus a bit off. I wish it was a bit sharper. I would also like to see the colour version of this photo because I think that there might be some nice contrasts there.

I can't believe how calm the water was. it must have been a beautiful day!:twocents:

Lovin
05-10-2009, 12:48 PM
OMG :) This is where I plan to go today :)
It's a beautiful sunny day and I wanna take advantage of that.

I like the composition, and the idea of b&w, but I have the feeling that is incomplete, like something is missing there.
Hmm...
I'm not an expert, or advanced photographer, just a beginner so wait for more experienced ones to critiques :)

Cheers !

Mad Aussie
05-10-2009, 02:42 PM
It looks as though the intention here is to create an image that looks like it was taken in the 60's and in that respect you succeeded competely I think.

Tough time of day to shoot the lighthouse. Looks like ther sun was dead above and very bright. Some over exposure in the flora and rock below the lighthouse is apparent.