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[Gazl]

craft.

[Iguanasan]

Hey, Gazl.

This is a very nice shot. Good composition. Great story telling plus it gets me wondering about the person behind her and what the face in the hands thing is all about.

Seems fairly well exposed and some nice vignetting.

My only quibble, since you put this in the critique section, is that it seems a little soft. This may be because of the board software. Was it larger than 250KB before you uploaded it?

[tirediron]

Agree with Iggy - very NG!

[Marko]

I like this shot and its treatment very much as well, but I'm not sure it's soft though. I see sharpness in the fabric and fingers which is good and suggests a larger aperture. But imo, you also want the eye(s) much sharper OR blurrier. Again aperture choice will help solve this.

I think I might also darken the woman on the right especially her sleeve.
Just my:twocents: hope it helps - Marko

[jlabel]

I like the picture and I do not see it soft no way