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sarrasani
11-30-2009, 02:42 PM
thank you for attention and commenting.
Sandro.

Iguanasan
12-23-2009, 04:27 PM
Hey, Sandro. These are some interesting candids that I missed a while back. I know this is not the critique thread but I did want to make a couple of comments. The first image is nice. I like the blue sky and the lighting seems pretty nice but I'd rather see more of their faces. The second one is an interesting shot too but the expression on the girl on the right is a bit strange. Looks like she's in the middle of saying something which leaves me feeling a bit disconnected.

I hope that helps! :D

Marko
12-24-2009, 12:18 PM
Hi Sandro,

Iggy has picked up a coupla things round here :), I agree with what he said.

Shot 2 is far more interesting to me than shot 1 though. Hope that helps.

sarrasani
12-24-2009, 09:02 PM
thank you much for attention. I agree with your considerations.
There is too much magenta, but in the second there is this particular "a little surprising" expression of the more focused girl that can be interesting (or not, be clear).
Both of them have many problems (as you told in the first too much shadows on the faces, and I repeat the colour in the second) and you are too much kind.
Bye!
S.

Iguanasan
12-24-2009, 11:07 PM
Hi Sandro,

Iggy has picked up a coupla things round here :), I agree with what he said.

Shot 2 is far more interesting to me than shot 1 though. Hope that helps.

This place certainly helps you learn about photography!! :D :D