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Tmorrison
03-25-2008, 02:58 AM
Any advice?

Marko
03-25-2008, 09:16 AM
Your strongest shot here is the multi flowered shot. VERY nice. The open flowers are still a wee bit dark though so i would try to lighten them a wee bit.

Marko

tegan
03-25-2008, 09:58 AM
In the white water shot, you exposure was too slow which just made it a mass of white blur. What works well is a polarizing filter and making every effort to getting some texture in the water flow. That requires some experimentation to get the right shutterspeed.

I also feel that your shots are on the dark side and would benefit from better exposure or some selective postprocessing.

Tegan

Tmorrison
03-25-2008, 07:53 PM
Thanks for your suggestions. I was trying to practice lighting my subject with a flash light, which is why they are a bit dark. I should have exposed them longer. With the water shot, I was trying to get the misty effect in the the water, maybe too much?

tegan
03-25-2008, 10:52 PM
The high tree shot by the way works best in the morning of a sunny day. The multiple flower shot would have been best with a low ISO of 100 for example and flash under-exposed by 1 fstop.

Tegan