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dulvari prestige
12-24-2009, 08:04 AM
While i was waiting for the rain to pass today, i thought i'd take a few shots of random things, this happened to be one of them, i think the tree is called an African tulip, this is one of it's flowers sitting on the bonnet of my ute.


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c327/dulvari/IMG_3592.jpg

Marko
12-24-2009, 11:28 AM
LOVELY shot Gina :highfive:, I really dig the composition here.
My one suggestion would be a crop or clone of the bottom edge from bottom midleft all the way to the right. My eye is needlessly spending time on that spot. Hope that helps - Marko

Rinkdaddy
12-24-2009, 01:02 PM
I like the DOF from front to back of the frame with the subject in focus.

Mad Aussie
12-24-2009, 02:17 PM
Lovely shot indeed!

le1parrain
12-24-2009, 02:23 PM
Simple and beautiful. I like the reflection.

kat
12-24-2009, 03:21 PM
Yes..lovely and simple! I like it! Marko gave a great tip there..I see that as well.

AntZ
12-24-2009, 04:58 PM
Lovely Shot DP. I like the DOF and reflection. The simple colours and water drops are cool.
I agree with Marko about the lines on the bottom right.

dulvari prestige
12-24-2009, 06:46 PM
Thanks to all for the comments and C&C, i actually did take that out in my first crop, but thought it added something, but after looking again, i now see what you guys are talking about.
Thanks for the honest opinions.

Problem cropped out
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c327/dulvari/IMG_3592-copy.jpg

Iguanasan
12-24-2009, 07:13 PM
Beautiful! That change made a huge difference. The colour is wonderful and the simplicity of the shot makes it great.

Michaelaw
12-24-2009, 07:30 PM
I first thought what the hell does this have to do with a passing train? Gotta get these eyes checked again :D It is a very nice image, love the comp and color:)

Bambi
12-24-2009, 09:35 PM
Beautiful! That change made a huge difference. The colour is wonderful and the simplicity of the shot makes it great.

I agree.

and MAW-:laugh: