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cadcamslave
12-27-2009, 11:30 PM
Thanks in advance, again.

tirediron
12-28-2009, 12:27 AM
A nice idea. I like the patterns and repeating lines, but there a couple of issues: (1) I would much prefer to see it composed either much more tightly on the concrete, or taken from a position much further to the left (if possible).

The main concern however are all of the branches and leaves which 'confuse' the eye. This one definitely needs to be revisited. Keep up the good work.

Mad Aussie
12-28-2009, 12:51 AM
I don't mind this composition aside from the dead branches in the foreground which I find distracting. You may not have had any choice in the matter though.

The blue in the fog is interesting. Doesn't look right somehow ... fog is usually grey-ish.

There's some quite stark divisions between the bright parts and shadows on the bridge ... this might suggest a suitable shot for B&W.

Bambi
12-28-2009, 10:15 AM
I don't mind this composition aside from the dead branches in the foreground which I find distracting. You may not have had any choice in the matter though.

The blue in the fog is interesting. Doesn't look right somehow ... fog is usually grey-ish.

There's some quite stark divisions between the bright parts and shadows on the bridge ... this might suggest a suitable shot for B&W.

I agree with MA and others. I love the subject but the twigs are iin the way. I know what that's like as well :wall-an: I wonder if we could lug around a weed whacker......

cadcamslave
12-28-2009, 12:58 PM
I don't mind this composition aside from the dead branches in the foreground which I find distracting. You may not have had any choice in the matter though.

The blue in the fog is interesting. Doesn't look right somehow ... fog is usually grey-ish.

There's some quite stark divisions between the bright parts and shadows on the bridge ... this might suggest a suitable shot for B&W.

The fog was very light and burning off to become a beautiful day.

Damned sticks...