View Full Version : The old shed

02-15-2010, 09:03 PM
This is a little shudder on our shed in our back yard.


02-15-2010, 09:57 PM
Love the colour...I find it a bit too centered though... I think it might add more drama/punch/effect if it was a bit more off center....especially the handle.
However, that's just my opinion...others may differ. :)

02-15-2010, 10:36 PM
nope I agree. I think I would either like to see more or less of it as well. A close up the handle would be neat as would seeing it in context.

and since this is a critique thread: it's a 'shutter'. 'Shudder' means something else entirely.:)

But I love the colour and the texture of the wood. I think that this has tons of potential.

02-16-2010, 05:33 AM
I agree the texture is really good, you could try and get slightly slower, it looks to me like you are not completely level with the door, so the top appears wider then the bottom... like Bambi says "I think that this has tons of potential."

02-16-2010, 10:09 AM
Thanks for the comments guys. I think I have a shot of just the handle. I just gotta find it.