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Sephibox
02-20-2010, 05:31 PM
Pretty much the last snowy landscape for this year, after spring finally came to Germany (by "blessing" us with cold yucky rain instead of nice snow)

There was no planning or set up. I pretty much saw this, stopped the car, got out and shot. Luckily I had the CP on the lense.

Any feedback, pp suggestions or comments welcome.

http://www.mst-reading-projekt.de/bilder/DSC_8714.jpg

Mad Aussie
02-20-2010, 06:04 PM
What part of Germany are you living in?

I like this pretty much as it is. The white balance is a bit off which has created a blue/cyan cast to the photo so I'd probably try to correct that.

I like the composition very much. I also love the shadows in this shot.

Just under the sun is a very difinitive triangle of white ... I'd be blurring or cloning that out ... just doesn't look right to me.

Lovely shot though.

AntZ
02-20-2010, 06:29 PM
What MA said :)
I like the composition and the light and shadow.

Bambi
02-20-2010, 08:03 PM
I won't repeat MA but I do like the perspective here.

casil403
02-20-2010, 08:12 PM
I just love the shadows here....just IMO well done!

Sephibox
02-20-2010, 09:00 PM
Thanks for your comments


What part of Germany are you living in?


I live in Heidelberg, the shot was taken on the countryside in Odenwald.

Thanks for your tips. You're right. Heres the edited version. I adjusted the white balance and took care of the weird looking sun.

I hope the white balance is ok. On one of my monitors the snow is how I like it (white) on the other monitor it's a little too warm, but I guess until I get a calibration system I'll be flying blind.

http://www.mst-reading-projekt.de/bilder/-Bearbeitet-3.jpg

Mad Aussie
02-20-2010, 10:18 PM
Looks a bit too warm but still a big improvement.

JAS_Photo
02-21-2010, 01:14 AM
Lovely composition. The snow is a bit warm on my computer as well. Still, a real nice shot though. :)

Richard
02-21-2010, 02:58 AM
Hi Sephibox, I think the texture on the road looks great. you did a good job on fixing the sun. es ist sehr gut!

MoinMoin
02-21-2010, 02:49 PM
Yep - Richard is right. The second try ist sehr gut ;-). Maybe it is some too much yellow touch now?

Sephibox
02-23-2010, 08:26 AM
Danke for your feedback. :)

So how is this? I feel this gets closest to what it was with a global adjustment. I would like to avoid doing localized white balances in ps, which probably would look strange

http://www.mst-reading-projekt.de/bilder/20100216--Bearbeitet-3-2-2-2.jpg

Bambi
02-23-2010, 09:37 AM
I like this version the best. Well done!

Marko
02-23-2010, 10:31 AM
The cast looks the best in this 3rd shot imo. Nice shot!

Mad Aussie
02-23-2010, 04:58 PM
Yep, I like the last version best also.