View Full Version : Abstract, yup

06-03-2008, 01:14 PM
Another critique please.


06-03-2008, 02:27 PM
Despite it being an abstract, composition still applies. With 4 large white spots, it is too balanced with no particular centre of interest to draw and hold the eye of the viewer.


06-03-2008, 04:54 PM
good point tegan - thanks!

anyone else?

06-03-2008, 06:24 PM
this is really interesting marko - what is it? how did you process it? i think its pretty cool - great for a desktop or something, because i just spent a couple minutes looking at it and could see lots of different things in the patterns & swirls. i do agree the 4 spots cause a balance issue - but with my untrained eye, i doubt i would've noticed it if it weren't pointed out. im really interested in what it is though!

06-03-2008, 09:39 PM
It's quite abstract I find. Even while i was looking at it, it looked all 'Jackson Pollacky'

what it is though!

To tell you the truth I'm not 100% sure, but it was floating right on top of the river. I was on a bridge and shot straight into the water. Anyone know about river foam? How do these things form? :lightbulb
thx marko

Alex Wilson
06-04-2008, 01:10 PM

Good balance of visual weights, and nothing that pulls the eye out of the image too much. The textures and shapes are interesting.

I really like it, excellent abstract.

06-05-2008, 08:49 AM
lol - thanks for the explanation Alex!

I have another couple that I'll post as well