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Pantheonofoak
03-06-2010, 04:28 AM
here is a photo of frost, hope you like it, i am looking for some constructive criticism on this one, thanks.

http://i855.photobucket.com/albums/ab120/Pantheonofoak/DSC_0011cropedplusdesktop.jpg

Marko
03-06-2010, 11:44 AM
hey P,

First off it's SO much nicer to embed the actual photo (using a 3rd party link or direct upload of a file that is LESS than 250k) in the post. Other members appreciate that very much. I also saw that you posted this in multiple places. Post many many pictures if you like, but please only post them once. many thanks. :)

This shot has excellent composition and is interesting to look at.
However, it is too soft which for me despite the composition, means I move on to another shot. The shot also looks a bit underexposed to me and it looks noisy.

Hope that helps - Marko

Bambi
03-06-2010, 07:02 PM
I agree with Marko but I wouldn't chuck it. I might try to turn it into a texture to use on another picture because I love the shape of it.

Mad Aussie
03-06-2010, 07:40 PM
I agree with the above comments but do think you might be able to do something in photshop or similar with this. Maybe using a Light render tool you can concentrate the light on the better bits and use the darker parts as a more purposeful shadow. Not sure if that makes sense unless you've ever used the light render tools.