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4 from a warm place

This is a discussion on 4 from a warm place within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; To me, and remember this is just my , there is a little too much information in the first shot ...

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    To me, and remember this is just my , there is a little too much information in the first shot to be considered abstract. It's a photo of a boardwalk but there's too much information to make it abstract and not enough to make it a clean photo of the boardwalk. It's kinda in between.

    The moss just doesn't work for me...not sure if I can explain it any better... possibly it's just the composition.

    The mind tries to make connections and while you saw it as a jumble I saw Orange and Orange and then everything else became a distraction. Even a jumbled mess has to be presented in an orderly composition.

    For abstract, I like the last the best. My only issue is that it's crooked.

    You are more than welcome to post multiple shots, however, posting one at a time will make it easier for people to respond as they only have to think about one image rather than taking the time to critique them all.
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    Thanks again; I understand your points and will keep them in mind while shooting

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