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    I was hampered by long grass, but the design on these mushrooms was interesting.



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    Nice shot tegan! Well done.

    If I had to be extra picky (and i often am ) I might suggest opening up the shadows under the larger mushrooms on the left and perhaps a wee bit of selective sharpening on the larger mushrooms as well.

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    Well, the shadows only opened up so far, but still an improvement, as well as the sharpening.

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    When you opened up the shadow you went too far as you created some artifacting under the left mushroom. It's 'stalk' now looks like it has hallucinogenic properties
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