Please critique this photo

[Lorey]

I think ya did a great job on the editing. I would get rid of the blown out spots between your eyes just above the eyebrows, on either side of your nose on the lower cheeks, one spot in the center of your upper lip, the right side of the mouth on the lower cheek, and maybe a little on the chin. Then print, matt, frame and hang an 8X10. Just my opinion.

[BzdegaPhotography]

I like the original much better, and I also agree with most of the comments.
Honestly the double chin you are worried about is much more pronounced in the altered photo and I like your skin and eyes in the original.
Much less intimidating.
You have great skin, and great hair and gorgeous brown eyes, focus on the beautiful things about you, as photographers that is mainly what we try to show is it not?

[SteveFrancis]

Very original !