Rolled Cable On A Pole

[Lorey]

Thank you for viewing. Critiques and comments are welcome.

[Mad Aussie]

I really like the 3 levels of colour and depth you've created with the sky, field and grass. If the sky was totally blue it would have been just that touch better I feel.
I'm trying to decide if I would have placed the pole there or not. I think I'd have framed it a bit closer to the left side of the photo myself.
This is a rather mundane subject made more interesting by the elements you've included and excluded. Nice.

[Iguanasan]

I tend to agree with MA's thoughts on this one.

[Lorey]

Thanks Iggy and MA for the comments. I got the same input from another forum. This is crop from a larger picture so I was able to move the pole over to the left. I agree with all on placing it to the left. This is a much better image than what it was. Thanks again!

[Bambi]

nice changes Lorey! Much more powerful this way! (no pun intended, really :P)

[asnow]

I think the second one is much improved.

[okmqaz42]

For me the second version is superior, you have the cable twist on one of the strong points of interest, the contrasting colours are excellent. I think this is one the would be better viewed larger than I can manage on my screen in the. Great work.

[Lorey]

Thank you okmqaz42, Bambi, and asnow. okmqaz42, yes it does look nice larger. I have a 20 inch iMac and that is my desktop pic. Bambi, that's punny