Huh! Well spotted indeed. Until you told me what it was I couldn't pick it at all. Not a bad title either.
Not sure I can offer any critique other than it could be sharper.
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I spent part of the day with the rust and peeling paint of abandoned railroad cars. What marvelous colors and patterns- I could've spent a week there
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Huh! Well spotted indeed. Until you told me what it was I couldn't pick it at all. Not a bad title either.
Not sure I can offer any critique other than it could be sharper.
Thanks MA- I definitely didn't see the "skyline" til after- the image is now upside down from its original. You can maybe see there is lettering along the bottom. I agree; would be better sharper. Thanks!
it has a neat kaleidoscope effect.
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I really like what you named your piece. I think the advice of trying to get a crisper image is good - and, IMO i think since you have the color there to play with, that you do - amp it up! :-) Love what your eye caught and your thinking outside the box! :-) good job!
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