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    So...here is they only one out of the bunch that was Okay. (refer to my post in digital questions)
    I Converted it to Black and White and Vignetted it. (is that the right tense?) I like this pose. But would have like it to be be sharper.

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    3 weeks? Oh my gosh; he/she is sooo tiny... looks like 3 mins... great shot! I love it!

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    This shot has EXCELLENT potential.

    I'd love to see a larger version and have you play with the levels a bit. It currently is very flat and lacks contrast. Less than 5 minutes in a graphics program could bring this shot to a 9 or 9.5/10.
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    Thanks for your reply's.
    The baby is very small she was suppose to be born in three weeks. (six weeks early) She is very healthy though.

    Marko, I can see what you mean about flat. I'm not really sure how to fix it. Like how i could make it have more contrast. Could I post the original and only if you have time see what you could do with it?

    No biggie if you can't, I can try again too.

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    Heheh, that's a cute shot I'm gonna have to try that with my niece Although it looks a little dark...or is that just me?

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    I noticed that it was really dark when I looked at it on my laptop today. My Personal computer shows it just fine. I didn't know if it was my laptop or my computer that was off. Now I know...thanks for the comment. Ill have to fix that.

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    This looks dark and really low key. You might do good to try and see what a high key b/w looks like for this, with a white or brightening vignette.

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    Hey thanks mindforge for the suggestion, I will try that.

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