The Sleeping SwordMistress (partial nudity 18+)

[Gaetan Cormier]

Here's one that I simply love! It's not something original out of my creation.. I saw something similar god knows where and I wanted to reproduce something similar.

Hope you like this one!

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7046/1139web.jpg

I don't know if Imageshack will keep this one... if you don't see the photo I will upload it on my server shortly...

[Marko]

Beautiful image Gaetan! I love the mood and lighting here. I would have a couple of comments on the cropping if you want my opinion...

[Gaetan Cormier]

Comment away my frend!

The framing of this photo gave me some headache.
I print images for my portfolio and I wanted to stay in a format where I could print in 11x14.. so thats about the best crop I could do. Otherwise I would've went more in a paronamic style.
If you have suggestion go ahead!
Worst case scenario I will just do the shot again.. she loves to pose ;)

[Marko]

We are on the same page then - the cropped too tight framing was my main issue.

the other was the shadow detail on the hair - I wish there was just a bit more light (a hint) on the lower part of her hair.

Even with those small comments - i VERY much like this image!

[Hillbillygirl]

Beautiful Gaetan. Love the tones here. Only niggle here, (as you already explained the tight crop), would be as Marko said, the hair just fades to black so quickly.

[Gaetan Cormier]

I hear ya Hillbillygirl!
hopefully soon I will have another with this model, so I'll try to not make the same mistake hehe ;)
Thanks for taking the time for commenting.