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    Here's one that I simply love! It's not something original out of my creation.. I saw something similar god knows where and I wanted to reproduce something similar.

    Hope you like this one!



    I don't know if Imageshack will keep this one... if you don't see the photo I will upload it on my server shortly...
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    Beautiful image Gaetan! I love the mood and lighting here. I would have a couple of comments on the cropping if you want my opinion...
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    Comment away my frend!

    The framing of this photo gave me some headache.
    I print images for my portfolio and I wanted to stay in a format where I could print in 11x14.. so thats about the best crop I could do. Otherwise I would've went more in a paronamic style.
    If you have suggestion go ahead!
    Worst case scenario I will just do the shot again.. she loves to pose
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    We are on the same page then - the cropped too tight framing was my main issue.

    the other was the shadow detail on the hair - I wish there was just a bit more light (a hint) on the lower part of her hair.

    Even with those small comments - i VERY much like this image!
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    Beautiful Gaetan. Love the tones here. Only niggle here, (as you already explained the tight crop), would be as Marko said, the hair just fades to black so quickly.
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    I hear ya Hillbillygirl!
    hopefully soon I will have another with this model, so I'll try to not make the same mistake hehe
    Thanks for taking the time for commenting.
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