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rhollang
02-01-2011, 12:33 PM
Not sure if the composition is quite good, well i still try , feel free to comment,

Iguanasan
02-01-2011, 12:41 PM
Welcome to the forum, rhollang! I hope you enjoy yourself here at Photography.ca.

I like the shot, I really get the sense that someone is offering up the apple to me. I prefer to give a proper critique in the critique forum as then I know you are expecting a full critique but since you asked for comments I'll make a couple. The biggest issue I see with composition is that there is part of a finger missing :eek: From a technical standpoint I would have preferred a much deeper depth of field.

rhollang
02-01-2011, 12:58 PM
Tks Iguanasan,

Yeah you are right about the finger, i haven't notice this... and i would consider a deeper depth of field next time, :)

Wicked Dark
02-01-2011, 04:29 PM
After a while it will be all instinct, but for now it's some job to keep all the "rules" straight.

Another thing I might do is isolate her arm more. Right now it's kind of lost in a blob of coat and jeans. If she were holding it away from her body across the grass it might work a bit better. Good instincts though. This has the makings of something interesting.