View Full Version : Indoor Moment from the Montreal Jazz Fest

07-09-2013, 09:23 AM
Please critique this image. thanks!

07-10-2013, 05:12 AM
Ever feel paranoid that you are being watched?

Not much of a critique I am afraid, but I love the repeating images and reflection. The colour change across the image is also effective. If I were to be super picky I may dodge the guys a little, as they get a little lost IMO.

Now - to critique that guys trouser length!!!!

07-10-2013, 08:18 AM
Not a bad suggestion RM - thx.

Mad Aussie
07-10-2013, 10:00 PM
Hard to critique an image like this one ... difficult to pick on anything at all. About the only thing I can suggest is the guys heads are hitting the corner between ceiling and wall which feels a bit oppressed to me. Does that make sense? I suggest that a slightly different POV to avoid that might have strengthened this a bit.

07-11-2013, 07:54 AM
thx MA.

07-23-2013, 10:07 PM
I love this one Marko. The colours, the repeating patterns, the reflection on the ceiling with mirror image. Very strong image.

07-24-2013, 09:36 AM
Nice one, Marko. I agree with MA, the only little critique is that the one person's head line up with that corner where the wall and ceiling meet. And that may even be a good thing because it makes it seem like a very small, restricted space--which makes the creepy mustached people even creepier. Other than that, I've got nothin'.

07-24-2013, 09:46 AM
Thx for the additional comments!