Please critique this image. thanks!
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Please critique this image. thanks!
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Not much of a critique I am afraid, but I love the repeating images and reflection. The colour change across the image is also effective. If I were to be super picky I may dodge the guys a little, as they get a little lost IMO.
Now - to critique that guys trouser length!!!!
Not a bad suggestion RM - thx.
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"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
Hard to critique an image like this one ... difficult to pick on anything at all. About the only thing I can suggest is the guys heads are hitting the corner between ceiling and wall which feels a bit oppressed to me. Does that make sense? I suggest that a slightly different POV to avoid that might have strengthened this a bit.
thx MA.
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"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
I love this one Marko. The colours, the repeating patterns, the reflection on the ceiling with mirror image. Very strong image.
Nice one, Marko. I agree with MA, the only little critique is that the one person's head line up with that corner where the wall and ceiling meet. And that may even be a good thing because it makes it seem like a very small, restricted space--which makes the creepy mustached people even creepier. Other than that, I've got nothin'.
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Thx for the additional comments!
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